variableUberwriter Posted: March 20, 20192019-03-20T23:51:32+10:00 2019-03-20T23:51:32+10:00In: FamilyAfter naively inviting her daughter’s various ‘godfathers’, a mafia overlord must prevent her wedding from becoming a gang wartitle: guns and roses ShareFacebook3 ReviewsVotedOldestRecentWayne 16 Loglines 38 Reviews 3 Best Reviews 835 Points View Profile Wayne Logliner 2019-03-21T13:15:59+10:00Added an answer on March 21, 2019 at 1:15 pm I like it!? Appears like it would be a script with lots of opportunity for conflict and comedy.? Maybe you could state the overlord’s flaw – this might give us more insight into the genre and theme0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppRichiev 61 Loglines 3,409 Reviews 308 Best Reviews 81,428 Points View Profile Richiev Singularity 2019-03-21T16:07:17+10:00Added an answer on March 21, 2019 at 4:07 pm I agree with Wayne, great premiseHowever, I don’t understand how a mafia overlord would be so naive about mob politics; that he would invite a bunch of feuding rivals to his daughter’s wedding.0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppdpg 105 Loglines 5,555 Reviews 559 Best Reviews 111,939 Points View Profile dpg Singularity 2019-03-22T00:13:33+10:00Added an answer on March 22, 2019 at 12:13 am Richiev makes a good point, but…This concept will inevitably be compared to the opening sequence of the “The Godfather”.? In that sequence, Don Corleone has invited his rivals to his daughter’s wedding.? And Don Corleone was not naive, was nobody’s fool.? The reason why Don Corleone invited them was because the mafia did have a code of conduct.? A wedding was a safe haven, a day of standing down; it was unthinkable? for anyone to dishonor the Godfather, to defile the occasion? with violence.? ?That has become the standard convention.To make the premise of this story plausible, it will be necessary to explain why the boss invited them and why they violated their own code of conduct.Also, why always the Sicilian mob?? IMHO, it’s such an overused trope.? In these times, there are plenty of other ethnic groups to choose from.0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppYou must login to can add an answer. Username or email* Password* Remember Me! Forgot Password?