IvyEight6Penpusher Asked: April 30, 20212021-04-30T04:06:29+10:00 2021-04-30T04:06:29+10:00In: DramaAn alcoholic man’s life has changed when he goes into recovery when he becomes a teacher at a school he graduated from.The Journey Within ShareFacebook2 ReviewsVotedOldestRecentThe_CNI 29 Loglines 20 Reviews 2 Best Reviews 1,187 Points View Profile The_CNI Samurai 2021-05-04T09:56:07+10:00Added an answer on May 4, 2021 at 9:56 am Things are very unclear, mostly with the inciting incident. What is it? Is it going into recovery or going to his old Ivy League? Also there’s no need to include “Man” in the logline since you refer to him with him/his pronouns. Is he inspired to go into recovery because he attends his old school? Or is he inspired to go to his old school after going into recovery?It also feels like something is missing regarding his recovery, since alcoholics tend to have a catalyst in their lives that inspires them towards this goal.The other thing that’s unclear is the goal. He goes into recovery and attends his old school, then what?0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppOdie 4 Loglines 282 Reviews 30 Best Reviews 1,654 Points View Profile Odie Samurai 2021-05-01T06:46:00+10:00Added an answer on May 1, 2021 at 6:46 am Leaning towards: “A recovering alcoholic turns to a life redeemed when he becomes a teacher at his alma mater.”Take care.0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppYou must login to add an answer. Username or email* Password* Remember Me! Forgot Password?