IvyEight6Penpusher Asked: May 10, 20212021-05-10T03:17:07+10:00 2021-05-10T03:17:07+10:00In: SciFiAn entitled alien prince teams up with a ditzy teenage girl to help him must travel back in time to alter future events in order to save his planet.Paranoia Hour ShareFacebook2 ReviewsVotedOldestRecentJay_Bird 1 Logline 6 Reviews 0 Best Reviews 34 Points View Profile Jay_Bird Penpusher 2021-05-10T07:55:44+10:00Added an answer on May 10, 2021 at 7:55 am Fun idea! I’d love to see descriptions of the protagonists, especially if they are an unlikely pair who are forced together because of circumstances out of their control. For example:An exuberantly loyal alien prince and a sullen, despondent teenage girl A desperate alien prince and a ditzy teenage valley girl An entitled young alien prince and a poverty-stricken teenage girlIf you already have the characters flushed out, just add the appropriate descriptive words. If you don’t have ideas of who the characters are yet, work on that first and it will inevitably make the logline more interesting.Hope this is helpful 🙂0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppIvyEight6 69 Loglines 90 Reviews 1 Best Answer 41 Points View Profile IvyEight6 Penpusher 2021-05-11T03:10:43+10:00Replied to answer on May 11, 2021 at 3:10 am I revised it.0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppYou must login to add an answer. Username or email* Password* Remember Me! Forgot Password?