thedarkhorseMentor Posted: November 5, 20192019-11-05T06:43:02+10:00 2019-11-05T06:43:02+10:00In: DramaAn ex-con, defending a reformed paedophile from an angry mob ? begins to doubt the man?s innocence.– ShareFacebook1 ReviewVotedOldestRecentMike Pedley United Kingdom (UK) 67 Loglines 642 Reviews 100 Best Reviews 51,026 Points View Profile Mike Pedley Singularity 2019-11-05T18:43:40+10:00Added an answer on November 5, 2019 at 6:43 pm We need to understand the ex-con’s motive.I wonder if it would be worth, rather than a reformed paedophile, make him a wrongly accused paedophile. Through the events in the film, we can discover that he was actually let off on a technicality or something and the ex-con discovers that perhaps he did do it after all.I’m seeing an “Assault on Precinct 13” type film.I think you’re right to drop the sister love story. Whilst it’s interesting, I ?don’t think it’s the A-story.Can you put this into a more conventional format. Inciting incident, protagonist and goal?0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppYou must login to can add an answer. Username or email* Password* Remember Me! Forgot Password?