thedarkhorseMentor Posted: November 5, 20192019-11-05T06:43:02+10:00 2019-11-05T06:43:02+10:00In: Drama An ex-con, defending a reformed paedophile from an angry mob ? begins to doubt the man?s innocence. – Share Facebook 1 Review Voted Oldest Recent Mike Pedley United Kingdom (UK) 66 Loglines 610 Reviews 99 Best Reviews 50,931 Points View Profile Mike Pedley Singularity 2019-11-05T18:43:40+10:00Added an answer on November 5, 2019 at 6:43 pm We need to understand the ex-con’s motive. I wonder if it would be worth, rather than a reformed paedophile, make him a wrongly accused paedophile. Through the events in the film, we can discover that he was actually let off on a technicality or something and the ex-con discovers that perhaps he did do it after all. I’m seeing an “Assault on Precinct 13” type film. I think you’re right to drop the sister love story. Whilst it’s interesting, I ?don’t think it’s the A-story. Can you put this into a more conventional format. Inciting incident, protagonist and goal? 0 Share Share Share on Facebook Share on Twitter Share on LinkedIn Share on WhatsApp You must login to can add an answer. Username or email* Password* Captcha* Remember Me! Forgot Password?