For a one hour modern sci fi pilot. Drama with social satire.
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An inexperienced businessman is forced to choose between allowing his only investor to torture the startup’s artificial intelligence product or hold to his ethics and risk losing the company.
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Is this really a one-hour story about someone making a decision? Should I let my AI be tortured? Should I protect my AI? Then at the end of the hour, the lead makes a decision.
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Is it a one-hour story about a man who must save his AI from being tortured while also keeping his business from going under?
The former.
Then the logline is solid
Wow. Thank you.