"Ancient Greek God, Zeus meets modern day Lilly and makes her life hades."
It almost sounds like a tag line but on closer inspection, the drama is beautifully implied.
I am hoping this is a romantic comedy where the God is trying to get through to Lilly but she is reluctant. Perhaps I’m assuming too much here. In this case, the genre should be more clearly stated.
His goal is to court her, hers to resist him – and perhaps make it work with an other lover? That last bit I’m making up but perhaps this is the part missing from the logline that could give it just a little bit more direction.
It’s not enough to make her life difficult; every life of every hero in every movie is like ‘hades’. What we need to know is why this is the case. What is he doing to her and what does she want as a result.