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juliana.o@zohomail.comPenpusher
Posted: May 7, 20232023-05-07T04:03:37+10:00 2023-05-07T04:03:37+10:00In: Fantasy

Centuries ago, the first generation of the Givean defeated the Darck Order and sealed them away. Many years later, the newest generation of the Givean must pick up where their predecessor left off.

Centuries ago, the first generation of the Givean defeated the Darck Order and sealed them away. Many years later, the newest generation of the Givean must pick up where their predecessor left off.
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    1. xtra3440 Penpusher
      2023-05-08T16:01:18+10:00Added an answer on May 8, 2023 at 4:01 pm

      Cool idea, and I think adding more information would make it even better! Maybe shortening the first part like “Centuries after [this person / these people] sealed away the Darck Order [In this specific way], [the important characters] of the Givean must continue. And adding the new way in which the Darck order puts up a fight!

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      • juliana.o@zohomail.com Penpusher
        2023-05-13T01:22:52+10:00Replied to answer on May 13, 2023 at 1:22 am

        Thank you, I will definitely take the feedback.

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