thedarkhorseMentor Posted: November 15, 20192019-11-15T18:38:41+10:00 2019-11-15T18:38:41+10:00In: Horror Chained together by backwoods people, a wanted bank-robber and his hostage must work together to escape and survive through unknown terrain. – Share Facebook 1 Review Voted Oldest Recent Nicholas Andrew Halls 53 Loglines 568 Reviews 6 Best Reviews 1,740 Points View Profile Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai 2020-06-28T12:43:19+10:00Added an answer on June 28, 2020 at 12:43 pm The “backwoods people” part of the logline doesn’t necessarily relate in any clear way to needing to survive through unknown terrain. The event doesn’t clearly correlate with the action taken to correct it. Perhaps it needs to be clarified, why the backwoods people are a threat, because that’s also not necessarily a given? What’s the arc of the protagonist? Could you provide a flaw that indicates the change the protagonist will experience across the story? 0 Share Share Share on Facebook Share on Twitter Share on LinkedIn Share on WhatsApp You must login to can add an answer. Username or email* Password* Captcha* Remember Me! Forgot Password?