China uses sunlight to stay in totalitarian power, but when a naive scientist discovers how to usurp their control, she's targeted by every national power there is.

    Finite Light.

    Default Posted on December 31, 2012 in Public.
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      I like this logline. I don’t think I can give you any constructive feedback for improvement. Good job in my opinion.

      Default Answered on December 31, 2012.
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        Wow… thanks I did write it over using 3 pages of notebook paper to get to that point. Also aiming for the 27 words limit as well. Hopefully others think the same or can give constructive feedback to improve it.

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          I like it. I’m assuming it’s an ‘Enemy Of The State’ -style chase thriller?

          If we’re going to be picky, you could try something simpler than “stay in totalitarian power” – “dominate the world”, or similar?

          Penpusher Answered on December 31, 2012.
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            If all the scientist does is cause a solar eclipse, that would be hilarious and I’ll be first in line to see this if it gets made.

            There’s just a B-Movie simplicity to that I can’t resist.

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              With a huge sci fi edge. It’s a Golden fleece type movie. Huge journey all over the world blah blah blah. It’ll be fun to write though.

              Default Answered on January 1, 2013.
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                You would say something like that. I wish the solution was that simple.

                Default Answered on January 1, 2013.
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