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N.J.RobinsPenpusher
Posted: October 11, 20212021-10-11T21:44:26+10:00 2021-10-11T21:44:26+10:00In: Fantasy

Chosen by destiny, five teenage runaways entered to a parallel world. Empowered by mystical swords,they vow to protect the kingdom from the army of the underworld.

Chosen by destiny, five teenage runaways entered to a parallel world. Empowered by mystical swords,they vow to protect the kingdom from the army of the underworld.
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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2021-10-13T12:40:37+10:00Added an answer on October 13, 2021 at 12:40 pm

      When writing a logline, it is good to figure out what sets the story in motion. What is the big event that changes the lead character(s) life?

      Let me try a logline from the perspective that traveling to a parallel world is that big event.

      “When they are transported to a magical realm under attack by an underworld army, five runaways head to the call to protect the land with the help of a snarky magical sword.”

      Obviously, I added the term ‘snarky’ to give the logline a little flavor.
      Also, this logline could benefit from having a lead character.

      Hope this helped.

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    2. Odie Samurai
      2021-10-15T13:18:05+10:00Added an answer on October 15, 2021 at 1:18 pm

      Leaning towards:
      “Thrown into a fantastical world, a group of teenage runaways armed with mystical swords protects an enchanted kingdom from the armies of the underworld”

      It’s missing the group’s psychology – do they want to go home? Do they make this new world their home? Will defeating the baddies open a portal home?

      Make this yours, keep going!

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