Ciara had a drinking problem. Now she’s trying to navigate her newfound sobriety in a world that’s often three sheets to the wind.  But when alcohol upends your life, what happens next? She doesn’t know…yet.

    Penpusher Posted on July 10, 2019 in Comedy.
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      This sounds like the denouement in a story about a woman conquering her alcohol addiction. If her biggest problems are behind her, what is the new conflict in her life? What does she want now? What’s stopping her from getting what she wants?

      Samurai Answered on July 10, 2019.
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        Check out the “our formula” page to help with formatting.

        What’s the inciting incident that starts this story? Who is Ciara? We don’t need a name… it doesn’t add anything to the story. Instead tell us who she is – character and characteristic. What is she trying to achieve – what is her visual goal?

        Hope this helps.

        Summitry Answered on July 10, 2019.
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