During the festive week of Christmas, a lonely student, recovering from a break up, is tormented by an unknown entity in red when he writes a spiteful letter to Santa.
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During the festive week of Christmas, a lonely student, recovering from a break up, is tormented by an unknown entity in red when he writes a spiteful letter to Santa.
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Leaning towards:
“A recently dumped student is tormented by an entity dressed in red when writing a spiteful letter to Santa.”
OR
“When getting dumped over the Christmas break, a spiteful student …”
Opinion: Inject a healthy dose of intrigue to strengthen your thriller plot e.g., question his sanity.
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A Xmas comedy horror story. Original. Excellent.
Lonely and heartbroken during Xmas, a student writes a spiteful letter to Santa and ends up tormented by a red devil.