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Posted: 2021-12-05T09:00:17+10:00 In:

During the festive week of Christmas, a lonely student, recovering from a break up, is tormented by an unknown entity in red when he writes a spiteful letter to Santa.

During the festive week of Christmas, a lonely student, recovering from a break up, is tormented by an unknown entity in red when he writes a spiteful letter to Santa.
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    2 Reviews

    1. Samurai

      A Xmas comedy horror story. Original. Excellent.

      Lonely and heartbroken during Xmas, a student writes a spiteful letter to Santa and ends up tormented by a red devil.

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    2. Samurai

      Leaning towards:
      “A recently dumped student is tormented by an entity dressed in red when writing a spiteful letter to Santa.”
      OR
      “When getting dumped over the Christmas break, a spiteful student …”

      Opinion: Inject a healthy dose of intrigue to strengthen your thriller plot e.g., question his sanity.

      Make this yours, keep going!

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