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MelisaPenpusher
Posted: September 6, 20222022-09-06T05:25:26+10:00 2022-09-06T05:25:26+10:00In: Comedy

Envious of the positive attention his new coworker receives from his colleagues and love interest , an arrogant, lazy (no work ethic, shortcuts) cheater male enrolls in a planned office marathon in order to get recognition from his office crush

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    1. Sonja Penpusher
      2022-09-06T05:38:22+10:00Added an answer on September 6, 2022 at 5:38 am

      Love the concept and logline! What is the event that prompts the main character to put in all this work to impress his love interest? Why now? Can you add something that is last drop when it comes to his envy, and that gets him going? Great work!

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      • Melisa Penpusher
        2022-09-07T05:38:21+10:00Replied to answer on September 7, 2022 at 5:38 am

        Thanks Sonja. What prompts him is when an accomplished marathon runner joins the office and all the focus is on him.

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