The criminals pale in comparison to the aliens, so best to only describe the aliens in the logline. The criminals...
In a world of magic and poker a player meets a friend of his dead father and…..
This is how a logline works.
The quickest way through a story
A logline should be about 20-30 words in length. Yours is a little longer than that…
This is a synopsis not a logline. Suggest you review the guidelines for composing and industry standard logline under “Our Formula” at the top of the web page.