Ellenebel Posted: October 18, 20202020-10-18T14:58:01+10:00 2020-10-18T14:58:01+10:00In: AdventureFood is scarce, tragedies are many but the fight against human extinction becomes an arduous mission for mans earliest pioneers. Food is scarce, tragedies are many but the fight against human extinction becomes an arduous mission for mans earliest pioneers. ShareFacebook3 ReviewsVotedOldestRecentNinann22 7 Loglines 15 Reviews 1 Best Answer 287 Points View Profile Ninann22 Logliner 2020-10-19T14:25:09+10:00Added an answer on October 19, 2020 at 2:25 pm It’s too vague. It sounds interesting. I get its post apocalyptic, but it’s missing a few elements. who is your main protagonist? Is he/she a scientist or a survivalists that no one took seriously? This will be the main character that the audience will cheering for. What is the antagonist force that will prevent him/her from accomplishing their mission. Is it a specific person or organization? Is it responsible for the near human extinction? In addition, what is their ultimate goal? The main mission. Getting to know who the character is, what their fighting against, and the goal will give a clearer picture to your story.1 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppRichiev 64 Loglines 3,442 Reviews 307 Best Reviews 81,678 Points View Profile Richiev Singularity 2020-10-19T12:33:31+10:00Added an answer on October 19, 2020 at 12:33 pm Who is the lead character? What do they want? What is standing in their way?1 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppdpg 105 Loglines 5,560 Reviews 558 Best Reviews 112,192 Points View Profile dpg Singularity 2020-10-20T10:31:42+10:00Added an answer on October 20, 2020 at 10:31 am As the others have said. The logline presents a situation for a plot, but it doesn’t present a specific plot. Check out the “Formula” topic link at the top of the web page for guidelines on composing an industry acceptable logline.0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppYou must login to add an answer. Username or email* Password* Remember Me! Forgot Password?