Fueled by an encounter with a haunted house, a novice paranormal investigator battles the supernatural for those with nowhere else to turn with her reluctant best friend.
Feels like a TV show not a film. You have set up a world (TV) and not a story (film).
A paranormal investigator that helps the desperate finds a woman that ………..
You have pitched a character not a story. If that is all you have at the moment (which is okay) write a story for them.
Fueled by an encounter with a haunted house, a novice paranormal investigator, along with her dubious friend go into the business of purging the world of the supernatural.
I agree, does feel like a series and not a feature.
You were so close to having me hooked! And then you finished with “with her reluctant best friend.”
Should I take the best friend part out? The friendship between the two is a big part of the show.
Agreed with the above comments.
Is this a film or series?
I know you have tried quite a few loglines. However, this attempt is a little awkward in its wording.
“When his brother is killed by an evil spirit, a novice paranormal investigator and his best friend search for clues as to what killed him while helping others struggling with supernatural forces.”
Um, not sure this pertains to my story line as there is no brother being killed by an evil spirit. It’s about two best friends who decide to offer their paranormal investigating services for hire.
Seeing as this is a series, you’d be better off focusing on the mechanism by which you plan to generate new sources of conflict. What will stand in her way in most episodes? And what does “…battles the supernatural…” mean?
