As in your previous loglines, most of what you have here is setting. Only at the end do we find...
(32 words) The Paper Chase
The love story subplot is setup in Act One. It’s the complication that threatens his objective goal. Otherwise there’s no suspense in his struggle. He’s got the chops, the brain bandwidth, the study habits, the resolve to succeed. It’s also the vehicle for working out his character arc (subjective need).