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Posted: 2016-06-10T08:21:33+10:00 In:

In ancient Egypt, when a cruel god seizes the throne plunging the nation into chaos, a mortal rebel must team up with a beneficent god to defeat him.

In ancient Egypt, when a cruel god seizes the throne plunging the nation into chaos, a mortal rebel must team up with a beneficent god to defeat him.
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    1. Singularity

      “When the malicious god Set seizes the throne of Egypt by killing his father Osiris, The blinded falcon God Horus must team with an industrious mortal thief to steal back his eye and retake the throne.”

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      Well seeing as it has been posted, here goes…

      After a psychotic Egyptian god kills his father and takes his eyes, the heir to the kingdom must team up with a mortal to get his eyes back and defeat the tyrant.

      I think the biggest problem with the concept is that there are two heroes – Horus and the mortal, and essentially one could write a logline for either of them. This means that the audience didn’t empathise with a particular?character and the experience was rather superficial.

      Then again there were many other problems, is there a word limit for posts on this site?

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