Test your logline here before spending months in development. This is not a contest, there are no prizes. However, you WILL get invaluable help in sharpening your concept and refining your logline. Make sure to start here.
I think your comment is valid BUT the beauty of this site is that we’re all here to take an idea and make it better. Maybe try evaluating your own logline as if it weren’t your own since you are already aware that it could be better.