In order to say goodbye to his dying mother, an exiled gangster turned priest must finally face his past.

    Penpusher Posted on September 12, 2019 in Drama.
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      That’s a good first half of a logline, but you stop right when things get interesting — Tell us what he must do, what he must overcome in order to say goodbye to his mother. The stakes are clear, as is some urgency with the ticking clock of her imminent death. There’s also some great irony in a gangster turned priest, we’re just missing that last element so we can accurately see this movie in our mind.

      Samurai Answered on September 12, 2019.

      Wonderful feedback. Thank you for giving me something to work on

      on September 12, 2019.

      When an exiled gangster turned priest discovers that his mother is dying, he must make peace with his ex partner in crime in order to return home.

      on September 12, 2019.
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