In the near future, a respected scientist goes on the run from the corporation that employs him when a self-experiment goes horribly wrong and he ends up irreversibly invisible as he searches for a cure.

    Mentor Posted on November 8, 2017 in SciFi.
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      If he is invisible, why is he on the run?
      If it is irreversible, why is he trying to search for a cure?
      “When his botched experiment renders him invisible, A desperate scientist must infiltrate the Mega Company headquarters and his old (Now locked down) lab to discover a cure, but avoid getting caught or become a human guinea pig.”
      Okay the beginning of my example is stronger than the ending, however I hope you see what I did. I began with the incident that turns him invisible, then tell the reader what the lead character must ‘do’, then I tried to give the reader some stakes (But that is the weakest part of the example so you might want to figure a better one out)

      Singularity Answered on November 8, 2017.
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        This sounds like the plot of Memories of an InvisibleI Man with Chevy Chase. Was this suppose to be in the ‘Classics’ category?

        Singularity Answered on November 9, 2017.
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