Looking for advice/approval on the following logline I created. Thank you!!“After being turned into a beast in a neo-gothic world, a fearless woman disguised as a woman seeks revenge against the cult who sacrificed her during the next hunt.”What do you think? criticism and help would be greatly appreciated.
I agree with the other comments – the mix of tenses make it confusing to read. Also, could you give the woman an adjective to describe her? I wasn’t sure if the Neo-gothic world is a version of Earth, or a different planet (in which case I’d probably just say that. Also, does she have to take revenge on the cult before they do the same to someone else?