Dbuckner25Penpusher Asked: October 21, 20212021-10-21T14:30:22+10:00 2021-10-21T14:30:22+10:00In: ThrillerNow we’re on the run, we gotta finesse a ton, mama say prison ain’t no fun. There’s no time for flaw, when we’re ducking the law, mama say shoot till we fall.The Riley Sisters ShareFacebook3 ReviewsVotedOldestRecenttvittitow 2 Loglines 6 Reviews 1 Best Answer 43 Points View Profile tvittitow Penpusher 2021-10-22T11:09:15+10:00Added an answer on October 22, 2021 at 11:09 am Appreciate the rapping. But this might fit better as a tag line of sorts. You know, the build up you see written on a movie poster. Log line needs to be a little more specific. Who is We? Why on the run to begin with? Industry readers want to know you have some substance to your work.2 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppRichiev 64 Loglines 3,637 Reviews 311 Best Reviews 82,278 Points View Profile Richiev Singularity 2021-10-23T23:43:22+10:00Added an answer on October 23, 2021 at 11:43 pm Who is the lead character? What do they want? What is standing in their way?0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppDbuckner25 1 Logline 1 Review 0 Best Reviews 20 Points View Profile Dbuckner25 Penpusher 2021-10-23T07:01:19+10:00Added an answer on October 23, 2021 at 7:01 am It’s not rap lol, it’s a free verse poem. You get the “we” from the title The Riley sisters. I’m only giving so much to make you read the story to find out more! A CEO of a movie production company is interested in this script so it has some type of substance to my work lol.0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppYou must login to add an answer. Username or email* Password* Remember Me! Forgot Password?