Once infected by a neurovirus that has an AI interface, it promises to help the host survive if the host helps with the mission of it’s own: to kill the other AI Neuroviruses that threaten it’s very existence.

Leviathan Samurai Asked on November 19, 2018 in SciFi.
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Your syntax needs a lot of cleaning. I guess your main character is the host, but you present the host in a very secondary fashion.

The main event is obviously the virus infection, plus an AI interface that goes with it.

The action is also missing. I guess the goal is getting rid of the virus,but we need to get a hint of the action that would lead to achieving this goal.

When infected with an AI-possessing neurovirus (EVENT), a snarky IT developer (CHARACTER) must destroy the infected server (ACTION) before she turns into a digital zombie.

Or something like that.

giannisggeorgiou Samurai Reviewed on November 20, 2018.

It’s more about killing other AI viruses not the one the host is infected with. So more like: A snarky IT gets infected with a pure AI virus that plans on destroying the other uncontained viruses before an annihilation hits the city because of them.

I think I could have done a little better on that one.

on November 23, 2018.
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Who is the lead character?

Richiev Singularity Reviewed on November 19, 2018.

right now, since I’m still developing parts of it. The main character is two people: The virus and the Host.

I’m working on thinning out to make both of them the main character, but right now, it’s a little more wordy than it should be.

on November 23, 2018.
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