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Posted: July 9, 20202020-07-09T02:21:25+10:00 2020-07-09T02:21:25+10:00In: Drama

One lonely Filipino seafarer in a cruise ship finds comfort to his roommate who saves money to marry but he falls for him unexpectedly and as they sail together his feeling grows deeper until he’s force to reveal it

One lonely Filipino seafarer in a cruise ship finds comfort to his roommate who saves money to marry but he falls for him unexpectedly and as they sail together his feeling grows deeper until he’s force to reveal it
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    1. Philippe Le Miere Logliner
      2020-07-18T15:48:53+10:00Added an answer on July 18, 2020 at 3:48 pm

      “Filipino seafarer” captures only the stereotype of nationality and occupation. This character is lonely. Why? If this were my logline I’d reflect more on character psychology. What might have made this character an individualist … character being modelled of experience.

      Drama category? Or perhaps Romance? Ah, gender reference? Roommate equal’s girl/boy? Hard to otherwise visualise story events.

      If this logline is romance, then plot structure would be two people desperate to be with each other …. but forever pulled apart. Think ‘When Harry met Sally’

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