Pitted in a spiritual batle against their evil cyborg uncle and his dark, sinister master, two spiritually gifted twin seek solace as they fight to avenge thier mother’s murder and find fabled elemental orbs.
Agreed with Richiev.
Clarity is key in a logline, unfortunately, it’s severely lacking in this case.
Here are a few of the questions this logline raises, which put the concept into doubt:
If he’s a cyborg why would he be affected by a spiritual fight?
What is a spiritual fight?
Is the uncle the antagonist or his dark master?
Why two main characters when the plot could work just as well with one?
Which is their primary goal; to find solace, defeat the antagonist or find the orbs?