Set in the year 2050: When he wakes up out of his coffin to discover that Transylvania has become an Orwellian fascist state, Count Dracula must lead a rebellion and take them down before they uncover his true identity.

    Samurai Posted on October 27, 2018 in SciFi.
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      He wakes up out of his coffin, or he wakes up and gets out?
      How does he end up leading the revolt? If he uses his powers of persuasion people will know who he is… besides he only gets out at night. Why is he trying to conceal his identity? Does he conceal it from his revolutionary partners?
      What triggered his awakening?
      When you say “take them down” you should be more specific: the oligarchy, the party, the president and his goons!? Who is the main antagonist? the police chief, the guy in charge?

      Samurai Answered on October 27, 2018.
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        As noted by Mandavirmais, the premise raises numerous backstory questions that have to be answered before the plot can move forward.  Before the plot even makes sense.

        Singularity Answered on October 28, 2018.
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          Since a vampire lives their lives in the shadows, what are the personal stakes for Dracula? Why does he care about politics?
          How does the Orwellian nightmare directly affect him?

          If you add the personal stakes for Dracula to the logine, I think it will improve.

          Singularity Answered on October 27, 2018.

          I suppose it’s not added in the logline, but besides being exposed as a vampire, Transylvania is also Dracula’s hometown and realizing that it has been invaded is also what pushes him to start this rebellion. He also hides among his own group of rebels, using a false name, so that they don’t know about who or what he is. Is that making it personal or should I add something extra?

          on October 27, 2018.

          Perhaps the fascists could be against ‘abnormals’ (Vampires, Werewolves, Succubi, Genetic monsters) And the rebellion/resistance could be a group of outcast ‘monsters’

          on October 27, 2018.
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