Six people with minds unlike our own. Famous movie monsters, invisible twins, conspiracies, clones, a lizard-queen, and obliterating an entire race. What happens when the line between reality and fantasy becomes blurred?

    Samurai Posted on April 28, 2019 in SciFi.

    title: PSYCHOSYSTEM

    on April 28, 2019.
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      The logline presents a cast of unusual characters, but it has none of the essential elements for an industry-acceptable logline. Consult “Our formula” for guidelines on writing an industry-acceptable logline.

      Singularity Answered on April 28, 2019.
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        Who is the lead character?

        What do they want?

        What is standing in their way?

        Singularity Answered on April 29, 2019.
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          You need an antagonistic force in a logline. This would be great for the back of a DVD or the description of a Netflix title, but it’s not a logline. Ensemble scripts are difficult to write loglines for because generally you want to focus on one plot line, not multiple, so boiling down your story to one essential arc will be key in re-writing a good logline.

          Penpusher Answered on April 30, 2019.
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            Agreed with all the above. Try also reading other loglines on this site to learn more.

            Singularity Answered on April 30, 2019.
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