Penpusher
Posted: 2021-12-02T15:08:02+10:00 In:

Starting their first week of high school, a group of four friends decides to make a mass impression of adventure.

Starting their first week of high school, a group of four friends decides to make a mass impression of adventure.
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    3 Reviews

    1. Penpusher

      Hmmm. This sounds more like a premise. This is my favorite type of movie so I’m intrigued. Maybe include a catalyst/inciting incident, what type of adventure they are going on, and what the stakes are?

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    2. Singularity

      I have no idea what you mean by “…a mass impression of adventure.”

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    3. Samurai

      Check out the Formula link in the header for logline help and examples.
      BTW: Show don’t tell, I am only able to glean “A group of high schoolers go on an adventure”

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