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mobiuswestPenpusher
Posted: October 26, 20212021-10-26T15:30:49+10:00 2021-10-26T15:30:49+10:00In: Crime

Stripped of his license a disgraced ER doctor running from his past reinvents himself in Japan only to be lured deep into a community with a violent secret where he must solve an unspeakable crime.

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      Richiev Singularity
      2021-10-27T13:38:05+10:00Added an answer on October 27, 2021 at 1:38 pm

      “Stripped of his license, a disgraced ER doctor reinvents himself in (Morrocco) where he is drawn deep into the criminal underworld.” (With seemingly no way out)
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      1: I would be specific with the country, I just put Morrocco but it could be any country, Brazil, South Africa, Vietnam because specific is better than vague.

      2: “Shocking consequences” doesn’t really tell us anything, I would leave it out or name the specific event, however, the event sounds like a plot twist, not an inciting incident so I just dropped it in my example.

      Hope this helped

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      • mobiuswest Penpusher
        2021-11-03T16:02:03+10:00Replied to answer on November 3, 2021 at 4:02 pm

        Thank you Richiev, appreciate the advice!

        Jim in Japan.

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