Tehran Kids is a Persian Series about Group of Music that they wanna get justification But something unexpected occurs to each member of the group which The Group has placed collapse boundary.

joker2008 Penpusher Asked on August 10, 2017 in Drama.
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Joker,

Unfortunately, I am unable to comprehend your logline. I recommend rewriting. I suspect that English is not your native tongue, however, that shouldn’t stand in the way of you organizing a clear and concise description. I suggest you read the formula or copy some of your favorite examples.

Good luck.

Foxtrot25 Overlord Reviewed on August 10, 2017.
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I would start with a lead character and what they want more than anything… and Foxtrot gives great advice.

Unless there is an over arching storyline that will last an entire season then I would use that as your logline.

Richiev Singularity Reviewed on August 10, 2017.

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on August 12, 2017.
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Agreed with the above.

Best to redraft this so it reads clearly and focuses on one main character.

Nir Shelter Singularity Reviewed on August 13, 2017.
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