henbSamurai Asked: June 1, 20192019-06-01T12:10:18+10:00 2019-06-01T12:10:18+10:00In: ThrillerThe Balcony-Scaler, The Train-Feeder, The Skin-Scratcher, and The Pornographic-Men. All serial killers. Their crimes committed the same decade, inside the same city where detectives will lose hope in search of justice.– ShareFacebook5 ReviewsVotedOldestRecentRichiev 64 Loglines 3,473 Reviews 306 Best Reviews 81,779 Points View Profile Richiev Singularity 2019-06-01T13:24:20+10:00Added an answer on June 1, 2019 at 1:24 pm Is logline for a series? or a movie?0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsApplempicka 3 Loglines 24 Reviews 1 Best Answer 736 Points View Profile lempicka Logliner 2019-06-01T19:44:54+10:00Added an answer on June 1, 2019 at 7:44 pm I like the names and the set-up, but I’m not sure who the protagonist is, or what the stakes are. Is the story from the POV of one of the detectives? Are all these serial killers in league with one another?0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppdpg 105 Loglines 5,557 Reviews 556 Best Reviews 112,194 Points View Profile dpg Singularity 2019-06-02T03:06:29+10:00Added an answer on June 2, 2019 at 3:06 am Like lempicka I’m not sure who is the protagonist or what the plot is, necessary elements that a logline should clearly indicate.??>>The serial killers were assigned to the the city.Need to know information that ought to be in the logline because it’s an element that sets the film apart from other films in the crime genre about serial killers.0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppkid_gokuu 2 Loglines 4 Reviews 1 Best Answer 106 Points View Profile kid_gokuu Logliner 2019-06-02T12:00:51+10:00Added an answer on June 2, 2019 at 12:00 pm I like the overall idea, even without a clear protagonist the logline seems to hold its own. I think that if you’re gonna go down the route of each detective taking on a different serial killer, the could be a clearer struggle. You allude to the losing hope in the logline, that seems to be the stakes you’re trying to portray, maybe you can turn it around by giving the detectives something to give them hope, like a lead that could possibly tie the serial killers together.0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsApphenb 23 Loglines 43 Reviews 4 Best Reviews 1,142 Points View Profile henb Samurai 2019-10-20T21:43:10+10:00Added an answer on October 20, 2019 at 9:43 pm LOGLINE UPDATE #1:Detectives lose hope in search of justice after it becomes apparent a variety of serial killers are active inside the same city and multiple murders are committed within the span of a decade.0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppYou must login to add an answer. Username or email* Password* Remember Me! Forgot Password?