The chance to bring to light a stealth Claimant to the Camelot Mantle is the media equivalent of the Holy Grail. Here is a tale of a woman raised in obscurity , in ignorance of her true origins. Living for years in the distant Provinces who has suddenly discovered her roots. More interesting, the Secret had been kept from her for over 50 years. Where the dark heart of conspiracy takes on a whole new meaning. This is the Zodiac speaking.

Golden Penpusher Asked 3 days ago in Horror.
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After reading this, I still don’t know what the story is about.

What sets the story in motion?
What is the goal of the lead character?
What is standing in the lead characters way?

Richiev Singularity Reviewed 3 days ago.
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1.) Discovering her roots. Who she really is. Uncovering the truth.
2.)To hide a child and how she came about
3.) The 16 year old Mother that the Zodiac killer (In his late 50’s)got pregnant. ALL the people who knew of this child’s birth &  her existence had to go…

This is a true story. You’re not suppose to know ALOT of what you ask. There’s more then just one main character. There’s basically 2.

Golden Penpusher Reviewed 3 days ago.

1: Discovering her roots tells us nothing. Telling us she comes from a family of werewolves, on the other hand, would be specific.
2: What child? (You don’t mention a child in the logline)
3: You say the word Zodiac but your logline doesn’t give us any indication that you are talking about the Zodiac killer.

3 days ago.

How you can tell the movie is about the Zodiac killer is when i say this is the Zodiac speaking which is the first line of his 2nd letter he sent to the newspapers. Anyone that knows about the Zodiac killer knows this. However, Thank you for your feedback. I can use all the help I can get on this. The story is massive…

3 days ago.

It isn’t obvious that you are talking about the Zodiac killer because I have never heard of him living in Camelot. I thought he lived in California, not in the time of King Arthur.

3 days ago.
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LIke Richiev I have no idea what the story is about.  And I am familiar with the case of the Bay Area Zodiac killer.

Of course, a logline  shouldn’t describe the plot in detail and should never give away a Big Reveal or the ending. But it must succinctly answer 3 basic question as explained in  “Our Formula”:
1]What is the inciting incident that sets the plot in motion?
2] Who is the protagonist and  what is her role?
3} What is the protagonist’s specific objective goal? What is she struggling to achieve or acquire?

dpg Singularity Reviewed 3 days ago.
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