The life of a well known assassin becomes chaotic when he finds he purchased the daughter of an old rival at a slave market, leaving him the choice to give her back to spare himself or keep her and die.

Leviathan Samurai Asked on February 9, 2019 in Action.
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Why is his life turned upside down? What’s his goal? This is just the inciting incident… what happens next?

mikepedley85 Overlord Reviewed on February 9, 2019.
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Agreed with mikep, this is just the setup, the story would be what happens next.

Also, when and where does the story take place? Is this a Sword and Sorcery story?

Richiev Singularity Reviewed on February 9, 2019.
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Being specific is your friend. Turning a world upside down isn’t a story. It can be used for nearly anything and that is the problem.

How is his world turned upside down.  Is he now being pursued?  Is he in love with her, when he should kill her for revenge?

Give us a goal, action, obstacle combination.

CraigDGriffiths Summitry Reviewed on February 9, 2019.
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