The mixed breed Believing to be a human being and having a normal life with her ‘parents’, Fiona coming back from seeing her best friend off took a new road to her home only to be got up between the above world and underworld clashes over the human race thereby finding out she was not a human but a mixed breed of both angel and demon and must choose the path to follow that will decide the fate of the human race.
There are a lot of words in this logline, a lot of set up, and yet I can’t picture the plot in my head.
What is the actual story about?
Because right now the only thing the lead character does is ‘choose’, and I don’t see how that will take up two hours of screen time?
Something along the lines of: “When she discovers she is half-angel, half-demon, a (Give a description) must (Do this thing) or (This bad thing) will happen to the human race.”