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How does the ex fit in, is he a love rival to the bikie, also does she have a flaw and what are the stakes here, I can see she’s trying to win back her ex but does this matter as she’s fallen for another man
Take 2: To please her dying mother by winning back her ex, a conservative librarian turns to self help books, but when she meets a bikie with the same addiction she is forced to choose between the two.