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HallucigeniaPenpusher
Posted: June 19, 20222022-06-19T13:49:44+10:00 2022-06-19T13:49:44+10:00In: SciFi

The survivor of a failed space mission must prove his loyalties between the bizarre inhabitants of an asteroid colony and the mad doctor who controls the colony or face certain death in the void of space.

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    1. Hallucigenia Penpusher
      2022-06-19T19:42:30+10:00Added an answer on June 19, 2022 at 7:42 pm

      Let’s take a different approach:

      The survivor of a failed space mission is stranded on an asteroid colony where he is swept up in a war between the bizarre asteroid inhabitants and their mad leader, but the survivor holds a secret that may doom them all.

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      • Richiev Singularity
        2022-06-20T04:03:10+10:00Replied to answer on June 20, 2022 at 4:03 am

        I like this second attempt

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        • Hallucigenia Penpusher
          2022-06-20T08:52:47+10:00Replied to answer on June 20, 2022 at 8:52 am

          Cool.

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    2. Richiev Singularity
      2022-06-19T18:30:54+10:00Added an answer on June 19, 2022 at 6:30 pm

      What is the central conflict?

      Is the central conflict just that the lead must prove his loyalty or die?
      Just curious.

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      • Hallucigenia Penpusher
        2022-06-19T19:28:26+10:00Replied to answer on June 19, 2022 at 7:28 pm

        Somewhat. It’s deeper than that, but that’s what it looks like when zoomed out.

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