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AKPenpusher
Posted: April 2, 20232023-04-02T10:35:52+10:00 2023-04-02T10:35:52+10:00In: Horror

Two blood testy women killer brothers, must face each other when One fall inlove with a woman

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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2023-04-09T18:08:25+10:00Added an answer on April 9, 2023 at 6:08 pm

      You might try to re-write the logline using different words. It took me about 5 tries to unravel your sentence. That is not a criticism of the premise, it’s just that the logline is a bit hard to read. And that is what re-writing is for. Keep working on this, and good luck.

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      2023-04-09T19:51:46+10:00Added an answer on April 9, 2023 at 7:51 pm

      Please any suggestions or sample, thanks

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