One other thought/question: what are the stakes? Why must she stop being a wallflower? What's so wrong with being a...
“The Horizon” – Drama
Sounds like a nice homage to the powers of music. I’m curious to see where this goes and what the struggles are. Good start!
I like it, it’s intriguing and it poses questions in my mind. I want to know more about these two friends, and what gives so much power to the musicians words. Nice job thus far.