Two recently unemployed nerds get more than they ask for when they fake a UFO encounter to generate publicity for their start-up business.

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Default Posted on July 13, 2012 in 01,   Public.
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    Comedy/Sci-Fi

    Default Answered on July 13, 2012.
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      I think you have a pretty solid idea here but I would like to know more about the story, I would like to know what problem the nerds encounter when they decide to fake the U.F.O. encounter.

      Default Answered on July 13, 2012.
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        I think this is a really good logline as it really pulls people in. However, maybe you would like to add more about what business they are in that would require publicity with UFOs? It might paint a clearer image about the film while not giving away too much of the plot

        Default Answered on July 13, 2012.
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          I felt like this detail was missing as well. But I was really struggling to find a way to put that in without overloading it with information. I’ll keep thinking about it, because I definitely think you’re right here. Thanks!

          Default Answered on July 13, 2012.
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            I really like this idea. It leaves a lot to the imagination, but that’s the fun part! I agree that you need to reveal more about their profession. By doing so it may even get people laughing, even at this initial phase of the pitch.

            Default Answered on July 14, 2012.
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            This sounds funny. I would definitely watch this based on your logline.

            Default Answered on April 13, 2014.
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              Hi brandongreen2015,

              Great logline for a great idea!
              I’ll run into theater on the first release day.

              Default Answered on April 13, 2014.
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