Two teenagers debate their philosophical views – with quarterstaves. But theur philosophical views are not the only things at stake; their friendship is, too.atv
assafPenpusher
Two teenagers debate their philosophical views – with quarterstaves. But theur philosophical views are not the only things at stake; their friendship is, too.atv
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Hi, assaf,
Again, I have difficulty understanding quarterstaves/quarterstaff. Are you talking about the weapon used in Europe during the middle ages? Are you trying to say: Two teenagers argue over their philosophical views/beliefs? What is the relationship between their philosophical views/beliefs and quarterstaves/quarterstaff?
May I suggest you write your logline without using metaphors, idioms, etc? Write it as if you are telling your logline to a 5-year-old kid. Straight forward black and white. Write it down, share it here and we will help beautify it AFTER we understand what it is that you are trying to relay.
I hope this helps.