Imprisoned by a cannibalistic backwoods family, two runaway bank robbers must team up with their own hostages – to get out alive and with their money.
ORIGINAL LOGLINE: Two wanted bank robbers must team up with their hostages when they become prisoners to cannibalistic hillbillies.
INTENTION: on the run/wanted/to be free/to get out with the money and their lives.
OBSTACLE: trapped/ facing an evil far worse than them.
Two wanted criminals on the run from New Mexico must team up with their hostages when they come across cannibalistic hillbillies in the backwoods of Texas.
-Chopped off the locations. Not needed.
-Made them bank robbers so you know they want to get out with the money.
– “To come across” is too vague. We need to know they will become trapped.
Another logline/a bit more vague:
Two criminals must team up with their hostages to survive an escalating ordeal with backwoods cannibals.