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thedarkhorseMentor
Imprisoned by a cannibalistic backwoods family, two runaway bank robbers must team up with their own hostages ? to get out alive and with their money.
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thedarkhorse
ORIGINAL LOGLINE: Two wanted bank robbers must team up with their hostages when they become prisoners to cannibalistic hillbillies.
INTENTION: on the run/wanted/to be free/to get out with the money and their lives.
OBSTACLE: trapped/ facing an evil far worse than them.
Original logline:
Two wanted criminals on the run from New Mexico must team up with their hostages when they come across cannibalistic hillbillies in the backwoods of Texas.
-Chopped off the locations. Not needed.
-Made them bank robbers so you know they want to get out with the money.
– “To come across” is too vague. We need to know they will become trapped.
Another logline/a bit more vague:
Two criminals must team up with their hostages to survive an escalating ordeal with backwoods cannibals.
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thedarkhorse
I’ll try this again…
When they are taken prisoner by a cannibalistic backwoods family, two runaway bank robbers must team up with their own hostages – in order to get out alive and with their money.
thedarkhorse
I’ll chop that down too…
Imprisoned by a cannibalistic backwoods family, two runaway bank robbers must team up with their own hostages ? to get out alive and with their money.
Working title: CAPTIVES.