Using a weapon bestowed upon him by a shamed doctor, a homeless man conquers his country. A dead body sees through its mind’s eye a war fought with lasers involving billions, and Canada’s ministerial election.

    Samurai Posted on June 2, 2019 in SciFi.

    title: THE HOMELESS CRUSADERS

    on June 2, 2019.
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      Who’s the lead character?

      What do they want?

      What’s standing in their way?

      Singularity Answered on June 3, 2019.
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        I have no idea what this is about.  Who is the protagonist?  What is his objective goal?  What is the inciting incident?

        Singularity Answered on June 4, 2019.
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          UPDATE #1:

          A young patriot who fought and received accolades in the Laser War is recruited to seduce and spy on an ex-politician and perceived threat to his country.

          Samurai Answered on September 10, 2019.
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            How does fighting with distinction in a laser war qualify the protagonist to work as a spy?

            And the notion of fighting in a “Laser War” is more interesting than seducing and spying.  It seems to me the story hook is in prologue to the plot rather than the plot proper.

            Singularity Answered on September 10, 2019.

            Actually, the script explores both scenarios in an almost equal amount.

            on September 19, 2019.
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              UPDATE #2:

              A young patriot who fought and received accolades in the Laser War is recruited for efficiently leading a double life, to seduce and spy on an ex-politician and perceived threat to his country.

              Samurai Answered on September 14, 2019.
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