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Posted: March 30, 20222022-03-30T18:11:04+10:00 2022-03-30T18:11:04+10:00In: Romance

Waiting for the results of a tests, Marc, a boy with cancer, meets Oscar in a hospital. The two young men end up having an exciting relationship, deciding to take a trip around the world. But not everything is what it seems, there is always something left of the cancer on Marc and secrets they try hide, which will soon come to light.

Waiting for the results of a tests, Marc, a boy with cancer, meets Oscar in a hospital. The two young men end up having an exciting relationship, deciding to take a trip around the world. But not everything is what it seems, there is always something left of the cancer on Marc and secrets they try hide, which will soon come to light.
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    1. sloanpeterson Logliner
      2022-03-31T03:08:36+10:00Added an answer on March 31, 2022 at 3:08 am

      This leaves a lot of questions. When you say boy, I picture a child. But then you say they take a trip around the world, but I thought he was in the hospital awaiting test results. Is this exciting relationship a friendship or a romance? I don’t understand the goal of the main character, is it to take a trip before he dies? Also, it’s quite long and wordy for a logline which should really be one sentence if it can be.

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    2. Andres_ Penpusher
      2022-04-05T18:32:01+10:00Added an answer on April 5, 2022 at 6:32 pm

      Quite long for a logline which should resemble more a cacht phrase and also the sctructure of the logline make it a bit confusing. Which kind of movie it is? you said romance but then you add the trip around the world which will be adventure unless is a honeymoon trip but is not clear.

      Also, for me, the fact that there is allways more cancer left in Marc is strange. You pobably now more than me about that as you have done your research for the script but this it something very unsual to me to have this kind of cancer for you character.

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