What is the most important for you; to be free despite you may lose, or stay as a slave despite you may win? It’s your own choice not the cold wire
A logline is supposed to sum up the whole plot in as fewer words as possible so a reader can understand clearly what the story is about. Check out the “Our formula” tab for more help on how to write one. Currently, this is more of a tagline and doesn’t actually tell me much about the story at all.