What is the most important for you; to be free despite you may lose, or stay as a slave despite you may win? It’s your own choice not the cold wire

    Penpusher Posted on March 7, 2019 in Noir.

    I am guessing English is not you first language. This does not make much sense as currently constructed.
    The ideal logline needs to be one sentence that tells the reader what the story is about.

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      A philosophical question is not a story.

      Who is the lead character?
      What do they want?
      What’s standing in their way?

      Singularity Answered on March 7, 2019.
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        A logline is supposed to sum up the whole plot in as fewer words as possible so a reader can understand clearly what the story is about. Check out the “Our formula” tab for more help on how to write one. Currently, this is more of a tagline and doesn’t actually tell me much about the story at all.

        Summitry Answered on March 7, 2019.
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