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RailGamm97Penpusher
Posted: March 13, 20232023-03-13T12:15:25+10:00 2023-03-13T12:15:25+10:00In: Short Film

When a devoted mother gets abducted by three dark entities into an alternate reality, a young girl, along with a sentient doll and a sly cat, must venture into the world to save her or she will never see her again.

When a devoted mother gets abducted by three dark entities into an alternate reality, a young girl, along with a sentient doll and a sly cat, must venture into the world to save her or she will never see her again.
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    1. Odie Samurai
      2023-03-22T07:51:23+10:00Added an answer on March 22, 2023 at 7:51 am

      Leaning towards:
      “When three dark entities from an alternate reality abduct a devoted mother, a young girl with a sentient doll and sly cat comes to the rescue.”

      What’s the intent of the three baddies for the mother? Use the answer to complete the rescue plan rewrite.

      I hope you find this constructive. Take care.

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