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beezeebeePenpusher
Posted: September 20, 20212021-09-20T00:08:06+10:00 2021-09-20T00:08:06+10:00In: Drama

When a gay man’s affair is discovered by his alibi wife who only married him to have kids, he must deal with the aftermath of their separation and battle her in court for custodial rights.

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    1. Vince Caruso Penpusher
      2021-09-23T22:56:20+10:00Added an answer on September 23, 2021 at 10:56 pm

      You don’t want this to be a synopsis, but a logline, so don’t give all this info. Attempt to make it more concise:

      It is assumed, because you say alibi wife, that they married with her knowing he was gay, so why would she be separate? She got what she wanted (kids), he got what he wanted (covering up his sexuality).

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      • beezeebee Penpusher
        2021-10-02T17:17:46+10:00Replied to answer on October 2, 2021 at 5:17 pm

        Hi Vince

        Thanks for the advice. The idea is that she tries to punish him because she loses her face in front of her family, friends and coworkers, not because of him stepping out of the marriage, but because he got caught.

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