Logliner
Posted: 2018-04-07T12:31:12+10:00 In:

When a grieving teacher is blackmailed over the death of his brother, he decides to silence the blackmailer and frame his widow?s new lover for the murder.

When a grieving teacher is blackmailed over the death of his brother, he decides to silence the blackmailer and frame his widow?s new lover for the murder.
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    3 Reviews

    1. Singularity

      An odd reaction. Is there a reason he doesn’t go to the police?

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    2. Samurai

      Sounds to me, like the guy is a reformed hitman of sorts who (reluctantly?) returns to his old ways. Also seems like it?s a win-win situation for him. Can you tell us what the risk is? Other than being found out, perhaps.

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    3. Logliner

      I like this. It starts strong. It ends strong. There?s a lot of intrigue here, and as I reread it, I can?t help but be slightly confused. What drives a character to escalate so quickly from being blackmailed to murdering and framing the murder on someone else? I wonder if you could tie the characters closer together in the story.

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